Assignment 3 – Blogging U 201 – Poetry – Acrostic, Trust, Internal Rhyme
I must apologize to my friend followers and those I visit regularly for not popping by or commenting on your posts. I have been so focused on writing poetry, which I struggle with as if shedding my own skin, I have not maintained my social graces. This morning, so intent on writing, I let an important appointment slip my mind. Ooops.
Anyway to get on with the post. Here is my offering for assignment #3 – Acrostic on Trust with an Internal Rhyme. The internal rhyme is not as subtle as I would like, but it is there.
Trust in Yourself
Touch a match to the torch
Restrain the stain of shadows insane
Undulating in the corners.
Sustain the light of truth
Through the pain of the darkness.
Cheryle Feb 19, 2015
Cheryle – what do you think of – Restrain the insane stain of shadows
Undulating in the corners … Just a thought …. I like the message of the poem, especially the last two lines.
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Thank you Marie, it reads much better. Good ear! In love and light Cheryle
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If ever there would be a group that would understand you have stepped out to write poetry…it would certainly be your followers here!
May your torch burn bright.
I like your poem.
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Thank you for your kind words. I popped over to your blog and am following you. There is so much to see. In love and light Cheryle
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Oh thank you. I am new to this website building, writing, and participating. It is such an affirmation of my efforts when someone shows up and then chooses to follow my site.
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